MATURITA - Vypravování

10. dubna 2019 v 22:52 | Vendy |  Postrach jménem maturita
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Zde je mé vypracování v angličtině, kterou bych běžně použila:



An Unexpected Visitor

Last week there was a very peculiar coincidence that occured at our place.

It was a sunny Friday afternoon when I was getting ready to visit my friend Laura. She had a birthday that day and I wanted to surprise her with a gift. I was zipping up my hoodie when our doorbell rang; I was so shocked! I came to our hallway and opened the front door. You wouldn't believe it; it was Laura!

I invited her in and after she took off her shoes, I asked her why did she come, she smiled and told me that she wanted to ask m efor help with her homework. "No problem," I said and moved to my birthday wish with a gift.

At the end of the day, it turned our as a very pleasant visit. We enjoyed our afternoon like never before.

Celkový počet slov: 146

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Zde je mé vypracování v angličtině na úrovni maturitní zkoušky:

An Unexpected Visitor


Last week there was a very strange coincidence that happened at our place.


It was a sunny Friday afternoon when I was getting ready to visit my friend Laura. She had a birthday that day and I wanted to surprise her with a gift. I was zipping up my hoodie when our doorbell rang; I was so shocked! I came to our hallway and opened the front door. You wouldn't believe it; it was Laura!


I invited her in and after she took off her shoes, I asked her why did she come, she smiled and told me that she wanted to ask me for help with her homework. "No problem," I said and moved to my birthday wish with a gift.


At the end of the day, it turned our as a very nice visit. We enjoyed our afternoon like never before.



Celkový počet slov: 146

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